so IMO,i really look forward to it,because its rare to see sims implement into a VN,the character design is very Attractive,last time i see a VN that uses the sims is Insimology,which is abandoned,and i really want u to succeed on this project. I also like your character Design,sent ur Sims Nickname,i wanna see and try some stuff out, like the whole family in a character gallery so i can experience whole. <3
Okay, I'm not even out of the intro and already seeing issues. The father left the wife. During the convo he calls his now ex-wife "mom". That needs to be changed to "Julia". Shortly thereafter, the narration says "he left Eve." Which, again, should say he left Julia, not Eve, as Eve is introduced two lines later. Meanwhile, in her introduction, Evelyn aka Eve, calls Julia "Julie". The names are all over the place and I haven't even gotten to the main character's introduction yet.
Out of curiosity, are you writing this with AI generation? Because as someone who uses AI generators as a hobby, I see the generators often lose track of character names and descriptions like that, though not usually twice in the first couple of paragraphs. lol
Hi how are you? let's see... the mom thingy was an oopsie of mine and the eve thing was Julia telling her sister Evelyn that her husband left, maybe it sounded better in my head hahaha.
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so IMO,i really look forward to it,because its rare to see sims implement into a VN,the character design is very Attractive,last time i see a VN that uses the sims is Insimology,which is abandoned,and i really want u to succeed on this project.
I also like your character Design,sent ur Sims Nickname,i wanna see and try some stuff out, like the whole family in a character gallery so i can experience whole. <3
Okay, I'm not even out of the intro and already seeing issues. The father left the wife. During the convo he calls his now ex-wife "mom". That needs to be changed to "Julia". Shortly thereafter, the narration says "he left Eve." Which, again, should say he left Julia, not Eve, as Eve is introduced two lines later. Meanwhile, in her introduction, Evelyn aka Eve, calls Julia "Julie". The names are all over the place and I haven't even gotten to the main character's introduction yet.
Out of curiosity, are you writing this with AI generation? Because as someone who uses AI generators as a hobby, I see the generators often lose track of character names and descriptions like that, though not usually twice in the first couple of paragraphs. lol
Hi how are you? let's see... the mom thingy was an oopsie of mine and the eve thing was Julia telling her sister Evelyn that her husband left, maybe it sounded better in my head hahaha.
"mild case of the gay" is crazy lmao
LMAO I just read that in the description from the thumbnail and laughed hard. It was my reason for coming here to try the game too!